Today I was waiting for the bus to come and I decided to go to the bakery while I waited. It was 8:33am and the bakery was already nearly full of people. And the line was nearly coming out the door. I didn’t have time to wait so I pulled out my freeze ray and zapped them all so I could just walk in front. Now I had my lunch for work and the bus still wasn’t here. After about 10 more minutes the bus arrived and I was trying to pull my bag onto the bus but it was heavier than I expected. It was also heavier than before.
Great story Thomas! I really liked how you ended your 100 Word Challenge with a intriguing sentence connected to the prompt for this weeks 100WC.
You wrote this really well with great punctuation and you followed this weeks prompt really well. Great job!
Hi Thomas
I loved this piece of writing